On College Students Renting House off Campus
It is normal that the college students rent house off campus at present. There are many reasons they do it. Although their behavior is supported by their different ideas, I find the thing which they feel is reasonable has advantages and disadvantages, either. Now I will show them as follows:
On one hand, I think the advantages about living off campus is we can have a very quiet circumstance to achieve our daily work. Besides, the convenience devices and life condition could make us live comfortably. On the other hand, by the way, I can list many disadvantages of leaving off college. Rarely do we have the time being studied in the university, if we rent the house off campus, we will lost the golden time when we lead the vivid life span with roommates together. What is more, the parents will be worried about the students who study, and live without colleges atmosphere, and I feel we should learn in campus where has many useful information help us to study, and find a satisfactory job.
To sum up, I think the disadvantage overweight the other one. In my opinion, the students need not to rent house off campus.
涛涛对Jessie同学的作文的点评：
这篇作文就是4级热点话题作文。整体文章逻辑条理不错。
但是，美中不足的是文章中词汇表达中有不少错误，例如：动词的时态，谓语原形动词和非谓语动词，单词词性的混用，名词的单复数等没有很好地区分。
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